Sempiterno (Extraños, #2): A Disappointment Wrapped in Potential
As a fan of Joana, I was genuinely excited to dive into Sempiterno, the second installment in the Extraños series. The promise of beloved characters returning and new plot developments always pulls me in. Yet, what began as an engaging re-immersion into this fantastical world turned into a frustrating experience that left me more drained than enchanted.
Plot & Characters
From the outset, the story seemed promising. The world-building and atmosphere were well-crafted, but I soon found myself tangled in a web of lethargic pacing and scenes that felt insipid. It was as if the narrative was stuck in slow motion, dragging along lines I felt added little to the overall story. Many chapters felt like filler, with an agonizing repetition of themes and jokes that didn’t land.
What struck me particularly was the transformation of characters like Swayer, Caleb, and Axel. They felt like entirely different people from earlier narratives, their essences diluted into a "family-friendly" version of themselves. This created a disconnect that made it difficult to invest emotionally. The romantic angles, especially involving Kristen and Jasper, felt clichéd and underdeveloped, like an elaborate setup for a punchline that never came.
Then there was Caleb’s reaction to the death of Brenan. While I understand the depth of grief one can experience—especially over a twin—it felt oddly dissonant. His lack of response towards Victoria amidst all the turmoil was jarring; for someone who referred to Brenan as “his death,” the emotional thread seemed thin at best.
Writing Style and Pacing
Joana’s writing, while still alluring at times, recycled scenes from her past works, giving me a sense of déjà vu. While nostalgia can be comforting, it felt more like a crutch here, detracting from the novel’s originality.
However, I must commend Joana for her gripping climax. A turning point around the middle of Chapter 20 reinvigorated my interest. When Ania arrives at the house, the plot finally began to twist in unexpected directions. This surge of suspense and energy was a relief after plowing through the slower sections.
Final Thoughts
In all honesty, Sempiterno had moments that resonated deeply, but they were wrapped in layers of frustration. The potential for deeper exploration of its characters and themes was vast—yet it felt largely untapped. I can’t help but feel a mix of disappointment and longing for what could have been.
For fans of the series who love the characters, there may still be enough here to pique your interest. The connections to previous books will likely bring some joy, but for new readers or those looking for a coherent, well-paced narrative, this installment might not hit the mark.
In conclusion, while my connection to the characters remains intact, my heart wishes that Joana had taken bolder steps in crafting a more compelling narrative. Perhaps with more depth and focus, Sempiterno could have fully embraced its potential. Until then, I’ll hold onto the hope that the next installment will bring back the magic I once cherished.
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